Which one do I Pick? by Emma

It was the day before Halloween. I was still deciding what I’m going to dress up as. A witch or a green alien. All my friends know what they’re dressing as, Ava is dressing up as a mad scientist and Chloe is some type of species of cat.

It’s so overwhelming! My mam is picking me up after school to go costume shopping and school ends in 10 minutes….. ahh!

The school bell rings there was my mam out there. I got in the car and we went to the Halloween shop.  I saw a lovely red and black vampire costume dress. I ended up ditching the witch and green alien ideas and getting that one.

2 thoughts on “Which one do I Pick? by Emma”

  1. nice story I can really relate because i have no idea what I’m going to be for Halloween either love your story keep it up.

  2. Hello Emma,
    With Halloween so close, it is a good topic for your 100WC story.
    Your good use of the prompt words, paragraphing and storyline demonstrates your growing skill as a writer.
    Well done.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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