Tree Monster by Rorí

I walked through the dark woods with my friends. But all of a sudden one of my friends was gobbled up by a big green tree. We were absolutely terrified. Mathew, Muhammud and I ran deeper into the woods. But the
big spikey green tree caught Mathew. Muhammud and I ran so far we had to eat something. All of a sudden a cottage appeared in the distance. Muhammud and I felt something on our shoulders. We ran rapidly down the
forest trail. In shock we found our parents having dinner in the cottage with the moster, they were having burritos.

4 thoughts on “Tree Monster by Rorí”

  1. Rorí,
    I was terrified along with the narrator, but the mood quickly turned to relief at the twist you provided at the end. I had to laugh at the thought of the narrator’s parents dining on burritos with the ‘monster’. Funny. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., BLOG BUDDY TEACHER and TEAM 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. This is an excellent piece of writing Rorí, I went through a huge range of emotions whilst reading your story and was caught totally unaware at that ending!
    This was very creative and your descriptions and vocabulary added to the overall piece too, well done!

    Anna (Team 100WC)

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