Town by Niamh

It was Saturday and I was going into town with my nanny, my sister and my cousin. We were going to town on the bus. When we got off the bus, we went for food. I got pasta with no sauce. When we were finished lunch, we went to Penny’s. I saw a red dress and I liked it so my nanny bought it for me. My sister and my cousin got the same dress as well. My nanny bought a few things for herself as well. When we were finished shopping we walked back to the bus and went home.

2 thoughts on “Town by Niamh”

  1. It was good but you need to put more detail in it, and put more comas in. It was really good over all.From:Maiyah

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