The Zoo by Charlie

Today we had our school tour. We were going to the zoo.Everyone couldn’t wait to see the gorillas. The entrance was made from mustard yellow bricks, I thought that was odd. Suddenly our tour guide appeared out of nowhere. She said, “hello my name is Amy”. A question came up about gorillas. Amy unfortunately said that we would be seeing the gorillas last. Finally we got to the gorillas habitat. The tallest one was running everywhere.Then the tour finished. When we were leaving we saw a girl from another school, one of my friends thought she looked pretty.

3 thoughts on “The Zoo by Charlie”

  1. I like what you did with the words. I think it was smart to say that “one of my freinds said that she was pretty.” but I wish that you could have said “and zach said that she was pretty.” (And I just used Zach for a example.) your hub buddy cole usa

  2. I like what you did with the words. I think it was smart to say that “one of my freinds said that she was pretty.” but I wish that you could have said “and zach said that she was pretty.” (And I just used Zach for a example.) your hub buddy cole usa

  3. I like what you did with the words. I think it was smart to say that “one of my freinds said that she was pretty.” but I wish that you could have said “and zach said that she was pretty.” (And I just used Zach for a example.) your hub buddy cole usa

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