The Zombine Apocalypse by Emmanuel

It was a very dark and grey Saturday when I looked out the window so decided to go to my mum and brother but they were gone. I went to make some cereal as I was very hungry but to my surprise the cupboard was empty. Finally I decided to go to the shops on my bike. Although it was Saturday nothing was opened. On my way home I saw my mum and brother in the distance, so I ran towards them but when I got closer to them I realised that they were zombies. I tried to run but then another zombie grabbed me by my shoulder and before I knew it there thousands of them.

2 thoughts on “The Zombine Apocalypse by Emmanuel”

  1. Oh my! Zombies! Well, you set up the story well. It flowed quite “normally” until the shock of your mom and brother being zombies. The title gave it away, maybe next time try a title that does not give away the shock of the plot. Good story.

    Keep writing!
    Mrs. Silver
    Team 100
    Illinois, USA

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