The Yellow Bike by Holly

It was Christmas morning. I woke up with excitement. My sister and I woke up our Mam. Then we opened our presents. My family was getting ready to visit my aunt’s house. We love visiting our auntie. My family and I made our way out the door. Suddenly I noticed a yellow bike in the distance. The bike was up against a tree. I was very confused. There was something about that bike I loved. Maybe it was the colour or the way it was up against the tree. I made my way towards the bike. I touched it and fell to the ground. Everyone around me couldn’t see or hear me. Nobody even knew I existed.

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  1. Very interesting story Mabey you can finish it in another prompt next time Mabey you could use some commas

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