The Woman in the Crimson Dress by Hannah

One day me and my friend were out walking my dog. Suddenly my dog darted in to a graveyard. I shouted at him to come back. Me and my friend ran after him.  It was very misty. When I turned around my friend was no longer with me. I looked frantically for her and my dog. In the distance I saw a woman in a crimson dress standing beside a grave, she pointed with big bony finger, ” they are over there”. I ran over to them in delight and said thank God for that woman.
” What woman?” said my friend AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH RUN!!

2 thoughts on “The Woman in the Crimson Dress by Hannah”

  1. Hi Hannah,
    Great story! It reminded of a scene from Scooby-doo. You managed to come up with a story concise enough to be within 100 words but also contained all of the prompt words. Well done. I especially liked the cliff hanger at end. It was very exciting. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Warwick, UK

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