The White Castle by Kayleigh

I was having a dream…. in the dream I said I wanted to be a princess when I grow up. I don’t know why, I just thought being a princess was crafty. I said I want to live in a BIG white castle and have 11 pets… I know that’s a bit much but remember this was just a dream. In my princess room I have a wall of ivy leaves. Every day I would bring out my dog and we would go rolling down the hill with each other. I woke up and looked around my room for the leaf wall… it wasn’t there.

2 thoughts on “The White Castle by Kayleigh”

  1. Kayleigh,
    What a lovely dream. I bet the narrator was sad to have it come to an end. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100 and Buddy Class Teacher, GES at FMS, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Hello Kayleigh, what a lovely dream! I like how you describe the dream and then make it so real by waking up and only knowing it is a dream by looking at the wall. I also like how you have the narrator of your story talk directly to the reader, “…remember this was just a dream”. Well done.

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