The White Castle by Daniels

One day there was a big white castle. Mr Crafty left a big stone on the side of the castle. One boy was playing with a football. I saw the big castle and went into it with my friends. The castle was big and old. Because lots of things are rolling around my friend got a bit scared and said ‘let’s go out of here.’

I said, ‘why it is kind of scary.’ Then the castle started to shake and we ran out and ran home. We saw it fall apart and we nearly forgot about it, even though it was kind of hard to forget it.

3 thoughts on “The White Castle by Daniels”

  1. That was a really clever way to use the word crafty in your story, maybe when the castle started to shake you knew it was time to leave?

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