The Voices in my Head by Holly

I woke up in panic, my hands shaking, not knowing what to do. I got out of bed making my way downstairs to the front door. I couldn’t control what I was doing. The voices in my head were pressuring me to do stuff, stuff I didn’t want to do. As I was walking outside, I heard footsteps behind me. “Which way to the shops?” it panted. It was so dark I couldn’t see what the creature looked like. Anyway I started making my way to the shops. Suddenly I heard a deafening buzzing sound in my ears. BANG!! I was on the cold ground not being able to move.

2 thoughts on “The Voices in my Head by Holly”

  1. I absolutely loved our story and it scared me at the end too. I would just say that you need to like introduce where you are and what you are doing in the beginning.

  2. Hi Holly
    I thought your story was very good and the way you used the prompt was brilliant.
    What happens after you fall on the ground.

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