The Two Explorers by Katie

One Sunday morning Bella and Molly went to explore the jungle. They were learning all about climate change so they thought just to have a look in the jungle.

Molly said she would bring snacks. Both of them brought a flashlight, blanket, snacks and water. Molly said goodbye to her family and so did Bella. They weren’t staying the night.

When they went out it was bright. As they were walking they came across something, it was a dried out river. “I have never seen the river bed so dry!” said Molly. “Oh no”, said Bella Molly fell in. They all started laughing.

2 thoughts on “The Two Explorers by Katie”

  1. Hello Katie,
    This is an excellent use of the prompt in your well written story. You have also shown your growing understanding of punctuation and its value in story writing.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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