The Tree Monster Part II by Rorí

When Muhammud and I left the woods we saw my bike standing upright and locked against the tree monster’s cousin. With caution we approached to unlock the bike.  All of a sudden the tree monster jumped out.  “It’s time for my revenge boys”.  Muhammud and I looked at each other and ran. The tree monster followed us and after a while we thought we had lost him but then he appeared in front of us, “stay put so I can ring Mr. Marshmallow,” he said. We tried to persuade him to let us go with some burritos. He said no, so that meant we were stuck with him.

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  1. Hi Rorí! I love your story! Make sure to capitalize letters when their meant to be capitalized! I might even recommend yours for the showcase! Anyways, Great job!

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