The Treasure – Judge

Jack and his mum Grace, when on a holiday in the Caribbean.  They visited a cave, Jack found something strange in the cave and was curious about it. So they were both puzzled about what they found. Jack quickly ran out of the cave to tell everyone about the good news, but his mom shouted “Jack don’t! where do you think you are going, we are keeping this to ourselves.”  They both gathered up the treasure they found and went back to their country, sold the treasure, and became very rich. They both lived very happy.

2 thoughts on “The Treasure – Judge”

  1. What an adventure for Jack and Grace! They were very lucky to find some valuable treasure – and even luckier that they were able to live off of it afterwards! Well done and keep up the good work!

  2. Oooh nice! Firstly a trip to the caribbean and then to find all that treasure! I’m sure they lived happily every after like in all good stories. You haven’t used the prompt in the fashion it was given, but that doesn’t take from your story. Great work.

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