The Tall Tree – Matthew

Long, long ago there was once a tall tree. It was 12000 years old, noone really knew how it still stayed up. The tree was so tall it was over the clouds! There was a gigantic ladder all the way up, and a little branch to the side. There was a family of six birds, living on the branch. Later when all the birds were sleeping, the mom of the birds went to get food. She climbed up took a nut, she slipped off the tree and was in the air. The worse part was she couldn’t fly, aventually she landed on a big and fluffy cloud. She really liked the cloud, it even tasted like candy floss! She hopped from cloud to cloud to tell her family to come and live on the clouds. After that they were the happiest family ever.

3 thoughts on “The Tall Tree – Matthew”

  1. Hi Matthew,
    I like your story because it was fun to read when she landed on the cloud,
    I wonder did they run out of the cloud,
    Goodbye from Szymon,
    Mrs Boyce’s Class.

  2. Hi Matthew
    I like your story because it is based with trees and fluffy clouds.
    It reminds me of a Peter Pan film I watched where Peter is on a pirate ship and it went above the clouds.
    What type of birds were they.
    Bye from Matthew D Mrs Boyce’s class.Please comment on my story

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