The Storm by Brian

One day, I woke up and it was really sunny. I went to knock for my friends. But, when Aaron came outside I felt the wind getting strong. Then, all of a sudden a storm broke out! We had to try and run home but Aaron had to grab onto a bench. I’m trying to hold on, he shoutedI went over to help him but the wind kept pulling me back! I didn’t know what to do and I was panicking and so was Aaron. Then suddenly something very, very strange happened...

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  1. Brian,
    What good friends the narrator and Aaron are to work together to help each other hold on. Your ending makes me wonder what happened. I am on the edge of my seat.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., BLOG BUDDY TEACHER, Guilderland, NY, USA

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