The Sea Creature by Holly

It was a lovely Saturday morning. My friends Emily and Sam asked me to come outside. I decided to go outside because it was sunny. We went to the beach. Sam noticed something strange in the sea. It was a big, hairy, ugly, frightening creature. The creature grabbed Sam by his legs and dragged him into the sea. Sam held onto a big rock. “I’m trying to hold on”, Sam shouted. Emily and I threw rocks at the creature. After hours of trying to kill the creature, the creature finally died. My friends and I are never going back to that beach again.

One thought on “The Sea Creature by Holly”

  1. Dear Holly,
    It must have been scary watching your friend being attacked by such a frightening creature. You have a beginning, middle, and end to your story. Nice job.

    Keep writing!
    Mrs. Silver
    Team 100wc
    Illinois, USA

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