The Screams by Ashley

I was in the forest with my friends, we had to stay close, we didn’t want to lose anybody.

The deafening screams echoed through the cold night, the sound was worse than when you scrape a blackboard. One of my friends had told us that coming here in the middle of the night was a bad idea, we ignored her though. It was cold and dark with only two torches to help us see in front of us.

We heard the screams again, except this time louder so we knew we were close. That’s when something ran past us, we had found it.

One thought on “The Screams by Ashley”

  1. Ashley,
    Your piece leaves me wondering just what IT could be?! You have done a great job building up the suspense in your piece. I wonder if you will compose a continuation?
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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