The Science Fair by Jessica H

Tomorrow is going to be an exciting day. Tomorrow is the school science fair. I built a rocket that can actually fly. I could barely sleep last night I was just so excited, today has finally come the school science fair ! I soon as I got to school I set up my project and the judges came around and I was so nervous. They ask me all about my project so I told them what I did, they ask me to show them. I set it off and when it just wouldn’t take off I ran off crying. This was probably the worst day ever.

3 thoughts on “The Science Fair by Jessica H”

  1. Great story Jessica. I like how you turned the story from a really happy one to a really unhappy one!
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

  2. Hello Jessica, oh, so sad! after all the hard work and expectation. I really liked how you showed your excitement about the project and the Science Fair. I almost felt like I was standing there when the judges came around and I was willing that rocket to take off and I was very disappointed when it didn’t. Well done.

  3. I feel so bad for you once that happened to my friend but with a volcano. Also don’t forget to make sure your sentence makes sense. But I would love to see what happens do you get a ribbon or you dont get anything. Keep up the good work.
    From, Ella

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