Last year for their school trip they went to the museum. This year they are going again. When they arrived they got off the bus one by one and went into the museum. Their teacher guided them into the room where 3 of the museum workers were standing. It was awkward. They started telling them about the sculpture on the right. Jack was confused. ‘It’s not like last year’ he thought and then got back to listening. We went to the next room. The workers were behind us. They seemed suspicious. When we got into the next room one of the workers started hiding something. Jack got scared. When they all got home Jack told the story to his mam. Nobody knows what they were hiding.
Dear Kayleigh,
I really like your writing! I think the mystery at the end is a really good way to end it to make everyone want to know more. When you came up with this, was it from an experience you have had or is it just made up? I think you did a great job on this challenge!
Sincerely, Lilly
Nice work! Yours is different from other posts and I like that. If you want to check out my post, visit https://elile2027.edublogs.org/2022/01/14/100-word-challenge-week-16/
Hi Kayleigh,
I really enjoyed reading your piece of writing! I think you wrote this very well and I am very curious what they are hiding. Have you participated in 100Wc before? I would love for you to go check out my piece of writing https://emmle2027.edublogs.org/2022/01/13/100wc/ Go check it out!
Sincerely, Emma