The School Trip by Kayleigh

Last year for their school trip they went to the museum. This year they are going again. When they arrived they got off the bus one by one and went into the museum. Their teacher guided them into the room where 3 of the museum workers were standing. It was awkward. They started telling them about the sculpture on the right. Jack was confused. ‘It’s not like last year’ he thought and then got back to listening. We went to the next room. The workers were behind us. They seemed suspicious. When we got into the next room one of the workers started hiding something. Jack got scared. When they all got home Jack told the story to his mam. Nobody knows what they were hiding.

3 thoughts on “The School Trip by Kayleigh”

  1. Dear Kayleigh,

    I really like your writing! I think the mystery at the end is a really good way to end it to make everyone want to know more. When you came up with this, was it from an experience you have had or is it just made up? I think you did a great job on this challenge!

    Sincerely, Lilly

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