The Robbery by Zach

One day there were a bunch of thieves were planning a robbery on a local shop named The Donkey Shop. It was the day of the robbery although it was a Saturday nothing was open but one shop the Donkey Shop the three thieves entered the shop. One of them told the shopkeeper to empty all the money into the cloth bag he was holding.The shopkeeper did what the thief told him to but in doing so pressed a green button under the desk.Within seconds the guards arrived and the thieves were banished to the haunted island and none of them ever returned.

5 thoughts on “The Robbery by Zach”

  1. Hi Zach
    Great writing for this week’s 100 word challenge! I love the name ‘The Donkey Shop’ although it makes me wonder was it selling donkeys or maybe accessories for donkeys. I like how you used the prompt and also how you created tension in your writing. It was very brave of the shopkeeper to press the green button and I love how the thieves were banished to the haunted island! That really conjures up some strange and scary images in my mind. Well done.
    Máire O’Keeffe
    Team 100wc

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