The Robber by Jody

On a misty cold evening a robber was caught stealing things from peoples’ homes. He was running frantically from our neighbour’s house when he got caught by the police. They shouted at him “stop right there!” The robber turned around and there was crimson blood on his hands. The police hoped that he didn’t hurt anyone. They checked the house and nobody was there only a little cat. The robber said “the cat scraped me”. The police laughed and said “thanks little cat, you helped us catch the robber, he is going to the grave after this.”

2 thoughts on “The Robber by Jody”

  1. Hello Jody, what a great story! It is really good how you have captured the feelings of the police and included a surprise in your story. You’ve used some really good descriptions too. Well done.

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