The Ringing Phone by Kayleigh

I went to the movies the other night. I was watching the movie minding my own business. My phone started ringing so I answered it…”Hello…HELLO”. There was no response so I hung up. My phone rang again and I hung up. It kept ringing so I turned my phone off properly off. I forgot my phone at the movies so I went back to get it. It was still off. When I got home I put my phone down (still off). 1 hour later it started ringing again…I didn’t remember putting it on. Who was calling me? Who turned on my phone?

3 thoughts on “The Ringing Phone by Kayleigh”

  1. Kayleigh,
    Your piece is very mysterious. I like how you used questions to highlight the narrator’s confusion. Good job with this week’s prompt. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Buddy Class Teacher, GES at FMS, Guilderland, NY, USA
    PS Please ask your teacher to remind your classmates to ALWAYS include their names when they comment to students in our class because I ONLY publish comments that include a person’s name. I do not publish ‘Anonymous’ comments. THANK YOU!

  2. Nice job
    At the end you had a real good hook
    You put a capital h in the second hello
    🙂 🙂 🙂

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