THe Portal by Alfie

I was in my house it was a stormy day and I saw a little door it was blue so I opened it. I danced in but then I fell from the sky. I landed on a tree but the tree was yellow and very fluffy. I was in a different dimension then I fell out of the tree and landed on a patch of red grass. I barely could get up and when I got up I saw a a blue concrete path. I rode my scooter along the path and at the end I saw a castle I was so tired.

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  1. Alfie,
    What a colorful adventure the narrator had on the scooter in your piece. I wonder what they will find inside the castle? You have handled the focus words creatively this week. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Buddy Class Teacher, GES at FMS, Guilderland, NY, USA

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