The Plane Disaster by Eden

‘Are we nearly there yet?’ I asked for about the 50th time even though I knew they were going to say no. The reason I was so excited was because I was finally going on a plane for the first time. About an hour later we were there but then had to wait another 2 hours before we could board.

 We got into our seats at the back of the plane and prepared for lift off. But when it just wouldn’t take off my heart sank. The captain came and apologized to everyone but I just sat in despair. 

3 thoughts on “The Plane Disaster by Eden”

  1. HI Eden! I really like your story! make sure to use proper quotation marks! When our class had this topic i also wrote about an airplane, so why did you choose an airplane. great job!

  2. I liked you story you had a lot of detail, and I liked how it was about planes, because I like planes

  3. Hey Eden! I really enjoyed your story because this actually happened to me! I know how you felt when you had to wait about 2 hours!

    Asher LaPierre from G.E.S Mrs.Gagnon’s class!

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