The Old House by Daniel

Dan and Tom were walking home from school. Tom looks over at the old house and asks Dan if he wants to check it out. So they run past the park and to the house. When they get there they see how a bit of the gate fell of and how bushes grew around the house. The rusty gate had the number 29 on it. “No one lives there” says a grumpy man walking by. Suddenly the other bit of the gate falls of whitch makes Dan and Tom jump. Later they ran home and did there home work and had dinner.

2 thoughts on “The Old House by Daniel”

  1. Daniel,
    I can see why Dan and Tom would be so ‘jumpy’ in this story. The dilapidated property, along with the grumpy man’s announcement would have made me a bit skittish, too. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., BLOG Buddy Teacher and TEAM 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Wow!! Very creepy. Your blog post is impressive and very exciting. I wonder what goes on at number 29 during the night… I’m going to bet something supernatural. I wish Dan and Tom didn’t get so spooked so we could have gone inside the house, although I don’t blame them for running home (I would). Your spelling, punctuation, and grammar are amazing. Keep up the good work Cliona.

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