The Oil by Amy

I was in the laptop factory. And then I saw something on the floor… it was red and liquidy.

“What is that?” I said.

It turns out it was oil! The red oil industry was dripping everywhere!

“EVERYONE EVACUATE THE BUILDING!!” Shouted the manager.

“THE OIL IS DRIPPING EVERYWHERE AND ITS VERY TOXIC SO YOU NEED TO GET OUT NOW ITS URGANT!!!”

Everyone rushed out of the building. Everyone was worried and afraid. It turns out one of the oil tanks exploded. The workers got it all cleaned up and got a new tank. I wonder how they cleaned it..

One thought on “The Oil by Amy”

  1. Nice job I thought I understood your 100 wc I liked how funny it was great I like how you made it seem like the manager was saying every one evacuate the building great job Amy👍👍👍

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