The Nuke by Nathan

It was 1782 and disaster stuck! Some dastardly man lit a nuke. Jack and Jill were the first to go to the shelter.

‘Jill come with me to the shelter we will be safe ‘.

‘OK I will come, but can we get some more people to help them?’

‘Fine’.

‘Come people follow me if you want to live.’

As they were following Jack down the town, Jack thought to himself about the nuke, if only it was a bit smaller. Gack in the shelter Jill was cooking a big fat chicken for dinner, hoping Jack will like it.

2 thoughts on “The Nuke by Nathan”

  1. Nathan,
    How lucky for Jack and Jill (and the others that were following them) that they had a shelter to use for protection. The chicken dinner sounds delicious, too.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100 and Buddy Class Teacher, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Why did the man lit the nuke ? I like how jack absolutely did not want to help others he wanted to be safe with his sister. you should have just said for example when Jill is talking if she was thinking something you should’ve said “ We need to help those people “ Jill said. Do you know what i mean ?
    But over all great work.

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