The New Year at School by Craig

It is the new school year. The three 5th class teachers names are, Mr Gorllia, Ms Yellow and Ms Bricks. I had a friend in every class, so I knew what the other teachers were like. I have Mr Gorllia, he was pretty serious. Tom says his teacher Ms Bricks is the schools running champion. My friend Ethan has Ms Yellow as his teacher he says she normally gives no homework, I do not believe him though. Out on yard Ethan and Tom and I played build up, after that the bell rang. I loved my first day at school.

3 thoughts on “The New Year at School by Craig”

  1. Dear Cliona,
    You had a unique use for three of the words for the 100wc this week. Great idea to come up with names: Mr. Gorilla, Ms. Bricks, and Ms. Yellow. I liked how you briefly described each teacher too. Keep writing!

    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Silver
    IL, USA
    Team 100

  2. Dear Craig,
    I realized after I hit POST that I addressed my comment about your 100wc to your teacher instead of you, the writer. I apologize for that error.

    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Silver
    IL, USA
    Team 100

  3. *I like the teacher’s names.They are so funny.

    *I like that you have included some of your friends.

    W)I think you should check your capital letters and full stops.

    You did great๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ˜†:)

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