The Meteor by Ashton

Not already! This planet is going to explode. The concrete is shaking ! Ahhh!!!!!!!!!

I know, I can get my old red rusty scooter and go to the space center. I know they’re busy, but if they launch a rocket into it, it goes somewhere else.

I need to get there fast. I don’t want my big fluffy dog to go to a different planet.

I got there at last.

Please launch a rocket in the meteor.


I saw spacemen do it before to save a different place….. Ahh! it was a dream. I got up and danced with my dog.

4 thoughts on “The Meteor by Ashton”

  1. I have read a story like this before. Could you explain more of the story? But overall you did really good.

  2. I loved your story! I also loved the ending! But can you please explain more of where you are and more stuff like that. Asher LaPierre

  3. Hi Ashton
    You have used the words of the prompt really well in this week’s 100 word challenge. And you had me on the edge of my seat from the very opening line when you announced that the planet was going to explode. I was glad to see at the end that it was a dream because there were so many different things happening and that’s very often what happens in dreams when everything gets tied up together. Well done. Great writing for the 100 word challenge.
    Máire O’Keeffe (team 100 wc)
    Galway, Ireland.

  4. Hi Ashton! I really enjoyed your story! By the way I am your penpal! So I want to say you did a AWESOME JOB!! You made a good idea about this story. One more thing too. I think you are a… THE BEST WRITER! I think both our story’s are amazing! Well done! By Joe

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