The Magical Door

One sunny after noon, Jessica and I went walking through the forest park, chatting and laughing. Suddenly we found a secret door. We were a little frightened but decided to go through it. At first it was a very dark forest but as we walked down this long pathway a waterfall appeared. The water was shining in the sunshine like glitter. Behind the waterfall we noticed two colourful flying unicorns. We hopped on and they brought us to giant animal ornaments. The unicorns sprinkled some magic dust on top of them and they came alive. We played with them for the rest of the day.

One thought on “The Magical Door”

  1. Hello, Cliona, what a magical story! It is great how you have set the scene of a wonderful and happy day, i.e. “one, sunny afternoon”. The word “suddenly” catches the readers attention to what might happen next and creates some tension. I really like your description of the water, “…shining in the sunshine like glitter” and the actions of the unicorns, sprinkling magic dust. A thought the story was very visual. Well done.

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