The Land of Colour by Mia

Ruby was worried about her sister, Lavender.She had been gone for a few days but how could she just disappear? Suddenly as if in answer Lavender appeared. ‘Lav I was so worried’ said Ruby .’I know Rubes but come with me ‘She said. They flew into the air. Soon they were in a crazy whirlwind of colour.It was CandyLand . There were candy in shades of ebony,coal ,butterscotch and pistachio.’ Here try some Rubes’ So she did. A burst of fruit hit her ,it was lemon ,lime , grape and raspberry. All her favourites . The girls never left Candyland

3 thoughts on “The Land of Colour by Mia”

  1. Hey,
    I really enjoyed your story,
    I love all those kinds of fruits too.
    If they did ever come back they would be extremely fat!
    From Naglis
    Mrs Boyce’s Class

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  2. Hi Mia
    Great story this I hope their mother didn’t miss them .
    To be honest I wouldn’t have left their either.
    Bye for now Mathew OG
    Mrs Boyces class.

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