Jack was running for his life. He ran into an old building. He put his back against the cold damp brick wall then suddenly he heard shouting and gun firings. He started running but suddenly he was stopped by a man in a yellow uniform. He zig zagged past the man there were screams still going on. He ran as fast as he could, he heard gunfire and saw a man wounded on the ground it looked pretty bad. He then looked behind him and saw a man charging at him like a gorilla. Jack was so scared he that couldn’t move…
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Darragh, You have used all the prompts quite well, flowing so picturesquely into the story.
Great work.
hi Darragh i loved your story it was really exhilerating and i loved the way you used the word gorilla please comment on mine athttps://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/tag/tadhg/https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/tag/tadhg/
I love your story because it is so funny.
Miriam
6th class
Sacred Heart Primary School, Granard
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Really cool story.
I really like it, well done.
From Leon.
Great job on getting showcased!!!!!!!