The Incident by Zach

There was an inventor, his name was Mike, who invented a yellow bike that could go anywhere. It could go up walls, down mountains and up lampposts. Mike was a very cunning inventor the bike took two years to make. There was an incident as he was cycling up an electric pole. He got to the top, he fell right back down faster than sound. The bike stopped when the back wheel hit the bottom of the pavement. Mike never made it. The bike is still there when anyone tried to cut it off the tool they used was destroyed.

4 thoughts on “The Incident by Zach”

  1. Zach,
    Your yellow bicycle tale is mysterious. I love your use of the word, ‘cunning’ because I feel like I know the character better now. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Your BUDDY CLASS teacher, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Hi Zach.
    I like your story because it was original.
    It reminds me of a movie that I saw.
    I wonder what happened to the man.

    Bye for now, Adam Mrs Boyces 5th class.

  3. Hello Zach.
    I like your story because the bicycle idea is cool.
    It reminds me of spiders since they can climb nearly anything.
    I wonder how it was made.
    Bye for now, Benny – Mrs Boyce’s Class

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