The Heatwave by Amy

The day is here. The hottest day of the year. I woke and felt very warm. I looked outside and it looked very hot. And then I remembered it is the hottest day of the year and a massive heat wave is today. I opened all the windows and put on a fan. I went downstairs and the kitchen tiles were extremely hot from the sun shining through the big window. The heat was unbearable so I covered the tiles with a blanket. I went outside but the second the sun hit my skin it felt like I was being poked with pins because it was so hot.

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  1. Greetings from Australia Amy. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge. I enjoyed the details you included to demonstrate how hot it was, ending with a simile. It was a clever author’s device to use nuanced words to describe the heat, going from very warm to unbearable. I always appreciate accurate punctuation -Thank you. I am nominating you for the Special Showcase.😊🌻

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