The Ghost – Sophie

When the door slammed I knew it wasn’t just my imagination! I’d felt something creepy around my bedroom for some time now. Nicol had come for a play-date, we were colouring pictures when suddenly my crayon started moving on its own on the page. Eeek! we both froze and coldness came upon us.
Omg what was that, we looked at each other with scared faces then ran downstairs to tell my Mam. Mam said ‘don’t be silly girls, ghosts are not real’. We had dinner feeling reassured. Then we went back upstairs to find the whole room was covered in Halloween pictures!! Spoooky !!

4 thoughts on “The Ghost – Sophie”

  1. Hi Sophie,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    It was spooky alright! I think I’d be like your mom saying ghosts aren’t real.
    Was there any chance it might have been an older sister of brother trying to frighten you?
    Good work this week.
    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)

  2. Hi Sophie,

    A really great story! It is very topical at the moment, particularly around Halloween time! The way you contrast between your imagination and the real life is really unique. I like also how you gave the problem chance to fruition. I can relate to this as when I used to get scared I would many a time leave the problem! The idea about Halloween drawings is really creative also. Keep up the good work!

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