The Galactic War – Craig

London: 3:00 a.m. I heard a noise, it came from up on the roof. I jumped out of bed and quietly went outside. I was surprised to see it was a u.f.o. A green robot came out.

“Surrender now!” it said. I ran as fast as I could, anywhere away from it. I started runing then I thought I should go to my Granny’s farm. When I got there I opened the door, the same robot was there. I ran exuding  fear.

In the woods. 5 :00 a.m.  I saw a bike stuck in a tree. Then I saw a underground silver bunker door…

4 thoughts on “The Galactic War – Craig”

  1. What a great way to immediately set the scene Craig. In just a couple of words you provided a location and time so the reader’s imagination can start building a picture. I wasn’t sure about the bike in the tree part though. How do you think it got there and was it connected with the robot?
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

  2. Hi Craig! I love your piece about The Galactic War! I loved how you put the times in your story and how you left us on a cliff hanger at the end of your story! But how many robots were in your story were there multiple or did the same robot just teleport?

    -Emily M, Hub buddy, USA.

  3. I liked the part were the robot came in.
    That could hook a reader in and it had some great words in their.
    I think that is a very good piece and i can`t wait for your next one.
    Do you think your next one will be even better.

  4. I Think That That This Story Is Amazing And I Think That Your Next One Is Going To Be Even Better.
    You Are An Amazing Writer.
    You Should Follow Your Dream.
    Do You Think Your Next One Is Going To Be Even Better?

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