The Flash by Holly

‘OH MY GOSH’ Josh screamed. He now felt like his life was officially falling apart. He was on holidays and while he was there, people have being making up rumors about him on social media. While he was reading these horrible things being said about him he saw a flash across his eye. He went to see what it was. He couldn’t make out what it was but it was so bright that the light blinded him. He woke up and he was in hospital he wonders what had happened to him and why people were saying mean things to him ….

One thought on “The Flash by Holly”

  1. Hello Holly,

    Poor Josh seems to have fallen victim to online bullying. How sad he ended up in hospital because of cruel and untrue comments.

    There are weak minded people who enjoy being mean to others through comments. They hide behind their computers feeling they can say what they want but usually wouldn’t dare say such things if facing their victims. Well done for sharing an issue hurting many people.

    The care I see in your writing demonstrates your growing skills as a writer. I hope you can continue to share your adventures.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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