The Ferris Wheel by Emmanuel

There was a new family that just moved into the town and wanted to try all the new and improved circus rides. There were three children, Harry, Isabel and Ryan. Finally they had reached the top of the queue and eagerly pushed and shoved their way through to get onto the Ferris Wheel. The ride had started ‘but it is SO slow I want to get off,’ screamed Isabel. ‘Me two!’ said Harry. ‘Me three!’ said Ryan, joining in on the protest. The wheel finally stopped and the children were complaining all the way unitl they got back home.

2 thoughts on “The Ferris Wheel by Emmanuel”

  1. Emmanuel,
    I can only imagine the disappointment for these children who had their hopes so high for a fun, fast ride on the coaster when they discovered it was so slow. I cannot help feeling sorry for the people who had to listen to them complain all the way back home. What a dreadful day!
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100 (And your BLOG BUDDY CLASS Teacher), Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Hi Emmanuel, I really liked your story this week. I like how you used the word protest to describe the seriousness.

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