The Extra Terrestrial by Alfie

“There’s a strange planet in front of me what should I do captain wait I have been hit I am going down Mayday Mayday!”. “Come in captain!” No answer. Then a peculiar creature raced up the road “which way to the shops? ” It panted “come on I don’t have all day”it said. “I don’t know” “you’re not from around here are you can I at least know your name my names Alex” said Alex “my name is Blorf ” said Blorf. “Why do you wear that funny costume” said Alex “this is not a costume” said Blorf “it is not”.

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  1. Hi Alfie,
    Interesting use of the prompt this week having an alien as your main character. My class struggled with “it” panted and wanted it to be he/she. We had lots of animals but no aliens.
    Something to improve your writing would be to have each speaker on a new line.
    Keep up the great writing.
    Mrs Horan (Team 100)
    Morrinsville NZ

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