The Doll by Aaron

One day Joseph, Kath, James and Milly were going to go to the haunted house for a bit of fun. They thought it would be fun. As they were on their way to the haunted house Milly found a doll.” What is this”?? “Milly you found the rare hatchable’s doll”.” It’s a 1 in 100 chance ,” protested Kath. Eventually they got to the haunted house. It was big and messed up. No one had lived in it since 1918 when king Alfie the II died of the Spanish Flu. Milly went to look at her doll but where had it gone???? She shouted in disbelief.

2 thoughts on “The Doll by Aaron”

  1. One of my friends at my school said that they like this prompt you did. I thought this was good. Is the haunted house known for something like do they have ghosts or something like that? As I was saying maybe you should’ve put more detail about the haunted house.

  2. My friend liked this prompt. This story was great. Is the haunted house known for something like ghosts or something like that? As I was saying maybe you should have more details about the haunted house.

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