The Dog by Zach

A kid name Tom always begged his parents for a pet dog  Five years later he still kept asking for a dog so his parents said ‘you can get a dog, we will go tomorrow.’

The next day his parents took him to the dog pound.  The people who worked there siad, ‘we only have two dogs, named Marmite and Isabella’.  His parents asked ‘do you want Isabella…?’, but before they could finish the question, he answered, ‘No’, he said, ‘I like marmite.’

The next day there was dog poo all over the house!

5 thoughts on “The Dog by Zach”

  1. Hi Zach, I really enjoy your take on the prompt. Good thinking to have a choice of unusually-named dogs in you story. Very original writing, well done. Pity about the mess Marmite left! Maybe Isabella would have been a better choice for Tom!

  2. Hi Zach.
    I like the part where they took him to the dog pound.
    I wonder who had to clean up marmites mess.
    It reminds me of film I watched.

    Bye for now, from Adam Mrs Boyces class.

  3. Hi Zach
    I really liked your story
    I liked the way you added the prompt and I thought the story was clever
    good story
    Bye for now Liam A Mrs Boyces class

  4. Hi Zach
    I liked the part where your mom said you can get a dog
    I wonder what was so good about Marmite
    From Warren Mrs Boyces 5th class

  5. Hi Zach .
    I liked that you finally got a dog.
    I wonder if Izabella would be better.
    I wished I would get a dog .
    Bye for now Kristupas Mrs Boyces 5Class.

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