The Devastating Moment by Emily

It was a boiling hot day.

My friends and I decided to go to Tesco. When we got there, all of the shops were closed! We were devastated because we couldn’t buy the sweets we wanted to make us hyper.

We left Tesco in a huff. We were not sure the reason why they were closed. Our vicinity was Applegreen. We all wanted to go there but Louise didn’t want to. She was defiant.

Finally we decided to go Morelli’s the ice-cream shop. Ella and I got milkshakes and the others got ice-creams and after that we all had a brilliant adventure.

3 thoughts on “The Devastating Moment by Emily”

  1. Hi Emily,
    I love the fact that you were devastated because you couldn’t get sweets to make you hyper! Too funny.
    Did the milkshakes and ice-creams give you the energy instead? Personally, I reckon they are better than sweets on a hot day anyway.
    Thank you for your story.
    Michelle Team 100wc
    Melbourne, Australia

  2. Hi Emily,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I laughed at the idea of needing sweets to make you hyper. I think you were probably doing fine without them. I recognise “defiant” from the Vocabularly Ninja Wow Words. I love to see them in the writing. Well done again!
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)

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