The Death of Little Red Riding Hood – Cian

After that major scenario with the wolf, little red riding hood decided to cycle to her cousin’s house. She cycled into the woods, along the way she met a bear.

“Do you want to have some tea and muffins in my cave little girl?” said the bear.

Little Red Riding Hood cycled away as fast as she could screaming “Help me!” as the bear ran beside her. She cycled so fast that the bike glided into the air. She turned to see where the bear was when suddenly the bike crashed into the tree. She fell from the tree and started to run but unfortunately she was not fast enough, therefore the bear gobbled her up.

3 thoughts on “The Death of Little Red Riding Hood – Cian”

    1. I enjoyed reading the part about were she crashed into the tree and started to run but got eaten. Did you really like the story or no ?I can see that you worked hard well done .

  1. I love the way you started this piece. It has me, the reader thinking, ‘Uh oh, here we go again!’
    I notice you’ve used a ? after the tea and muffins bit – should this perhaps have been ‘asked’ the bear instead of ‘said’.
    I wonder if you’ve seen the movie ET. If you haven’t, do try to Cian. Your LRRH gliding into the air on her bike reminds me of that!
    Thanks for sharing,

    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Plymouth
    New Zealand

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