The Darkness by Alfie

It was a damp and frosty morning. John looked out the window and saw something strange. So he sneaked down the stairs and put his shoes on and put his coat on and off he went. When he opened the door a gust of cold damp air flooded the house. He walked around the colossal brown puddles and over to the mysterious black hole “I swear it got bigger” thought John. After a little more inspection he walked away then he fell backwards into something and he realised that he he had fallen into the hole. He looked up there was a flash of light then darkness he was trapped!

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  1. I have fallen in a hole before. The way John is curios makes your story extremely intresting. Will John ever get out?

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