The Crazy School by Katie

It was a normal day in school. All the class were so excited for music class. Mr Green was the best teacher so all the class went. They were in the classroom and Mr Green said they were going to play the violin. So the class started playing it suddenly a light shined at the door. All the class flinched after a while they were wondering what to do. Mr Green thought to go in just to see they went in. It was a whole different world it was so big. There were some cactus they were very prickly. They walked home they found some bruised apples.

3 thoughts on “The Crazy School by Katie”

  1. I love your story!!! It is very nice and detailed. I would’ve liked to have more detail about the classroom and longer time on the apples. Other than that I loved it and great job!!!!! Our music teacher is names Mrs. Ciastko ,so hats your music teacher name?

  2. I meant to say ‘ I love your story!!! It is very nice and detailed. I would’ve liked to have more detail about the classroom and longer time on the apples. Other than that I loved it and great job!!!!! Our music teacher is names Mrs. Ciastko ,so what’s your music teacher name?’

  3. Hello Katie I LOVED your story it was very coll and i liked how the bright light changed EVERYTHING.I olso liked how you jumped right into the story.It was such a good story.

    Soleil Dupuis GES at FMS

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