The Car Crash by Jessica M

When I was four my family and I were in a car crash on the m1 because a man was not driving properly. This hit six other cars.My mam, me, my dad had to go to the hospital. I felt very scared and I also felt sad.When I got to the hospital I got a colar around my neck .Then I went to my granny’s house and stayed till the next day and it reminded me of a time when I was in a car crash a few weeks ago. This happened out side of Super Valu because a man drove into our car when he drove out of a car parking space.

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  1. Hi Jessica, and first of all sorry for your mishaps. It is awful when things happen that are not our fault. You have used your (bad) experience to create a very good 100WC story and have structured it well I think. Try to remember spaces after your full stops maybe but, other than that I think this is an excellent piece of work and a very positive outcome from a bad situation. Well done!

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