The Borrowers by Daniel

There was a family under the fridge. There was a boy names Dan. This year he turned 18 and he will be able to borrow things on his own. He always helped his dad borrow things and he found it fun. One time he was nearly seen. He was in this room looking at some pink fluffy glasses. Suddenly a man came in and Dan hid behind the glasses. His dad was super worried and ran over. Dad was seen. They both ran as the man screamed and tried to squish them. They barely got away. After that they we’re exhausted.

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  1. Hi Daniel,
    I’ve just nominated you for Showcase this week as I thought your 100wc was terrific!

    You set the story up well and I could just imagine the miniature family living under the fridge. I’m so glad that Dan and his dad managed to escape and didn’t get squished.

    Well done,

    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

    P.S. Minor typo in the last row – we’re

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