I went for a walk in the woods yesterday, when I came across a bike going straight through a tree!
I looked around the tree desperate to find clues. I saw a square shaped stone that read…
“Tom Donuhou.
Died 8th of December 1990.
Due to a bycicle crash.
We miss you.”
I gently touched the tree. Suddenly I got pulled in!!!
I landed and realised it was 1990!!!
I was beside the tree where the crash happened. Just then I saw a boy on the same bike.
I had to save him. I ran up to him and told him that the path was blocked off to turn back. I felt so good that I saved his life.
Brilliant! Ashley, I really enjoyed your story and loved how you were able to surprise me with your ending. I really didn’t expect you to get pulled in by the tree and how fabulous that you were able to change the outcome.
From Michelle, Melbourne, Australia
It sounds really good. I also liked the time travel where you saved the boy. Brandon-Hub buddy USA