The Battle for Spare Ships by Rorí

I watched them load the cannons as they shot the monstrosity of a building. “Another ship,” said one of the pirates. The Purples are here and it looks like they got new cannons and the new recruits do not look nice. One lad is about 12ft tall. “Oh no,” said the one who is always nervous, he was nervous when they were getting a new door handle. But we have John. John didn’t do his Leaving Cert for a reason. He wanted to be a pirate. Four hours later the ship has been destroyed but not John. John turned around and Bam! Bam! Bam! OUCH!!!!

2 thoughts on “The Battle for Spare Ships by Rorí”

  1. I like how it was a battle between the ships. You had a great lead “I watched them load the cannons” it hooked me in fast and just by the lead I new it was going to be a great story. Crosby

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