The Balloon by Mya

As I walk to school I nervously take a sip of water because I have an important test today. When I’m about to walk into the school I trip over a grey balloon . It’s a cabbage shape balloon.

While I’m on the ground ‘BANG’ a round pebble hits my head. “OW!” I shout out as I rub my head. While I got up I try to grab the balloon but it’s gone.

I stroll into my class acting like nothing happened. Every day when I walk into school I make sure there’s no balloons in my way.

One thought on “The Balloon by Mya”

  1. Hello Mya!
    You successfully incorporated all of this week’s prompt words into your entry-way to go! If you were going to continue with this entry, one suggestion I have is to describe or even wonder how and why the balloon came to land on the ground.
    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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